Personal recount(draft 1)

It was one of the most memorable time with my family.It was Sunday so there was no school but there was homework but i managed to finish my homework yesterday so my family decided to go to the river safari.The sun was shining brightly and it was hot and humid day,we walking non-stop for 2 hours until we saw a restaurant.We went in and sit down there and ate our lunch at the restaurant.While we were ordering we where curios which animal we were going to see.We quickly ate our lunch and continue our journey.Everything was quiet.The sign says'Please be quiet' than i noticed that the next animal we were going to see was the red panda and the giant panda.They were so adorable.Unfortunately,it was crowded and it was hard for me.Luckily it wasn't raining and there wasn't many people taking the safari boat so went to the boat.It cost total about $50 as we book the boat.After the journey,we were tired but happy.I'm looking forward to go to Australia and i promised i would write about my journey to Australia.

Movie review

Title:Frozen

Describe the most exciting/memorable part of the movie.Why do you like it?

Answer:Elsa ran away from the kingdom of arendelle.Elsa sang the song 'Let it go' by Demi Lovato.I enjoy listening to the song.While singing she was building a castle made of ice and it was beautiful.The reason why i love this part was Demi Lovato is one of my favourite singer and i would look forward for her new songs.

If you could rewrite one part of the movie,which part would it be and why?How would like to rewrite?

Answer:My favourite part was Elsa managed to control her power and fight back aganist the villians and managed to turn the season back to summer.She took a lot of courage to do that.Overall the movie was awesome and funny too especially the snowman.(who love summer)

List three things that you have picked up from watching the movie.

1.It is wrong to marry a person without knowing his/her true colours

2.Gaining the courage from the love one is important

3.Always be careful(especially when Elsa was playing with her powers till it her sister)

Process Writing (Draft 1)

Name:Sarup
Class:1E1
Date:3/2/14
Draft 1
Dear Arjun,
How are you?I'm fine.So how was school in United Kingdom?My sister,my family and i miss you.Do visit Singapore sometimes!Have you heard an incident  which occurs at Little Inida 31 days ago.If you have not heard of it,let me tell you about the incident.
It all started when a driver of a private bus knock down onto an Indian National,Sakthivel Kumaravela,33 years old,at the junction of Hampshire Road and  Race Course Road.There was an estimation about 300 Indian National involved in the riot that lasted for 2 hours.
I believed it could be their friend,loved ones or same Nationality that doesn't mean that they should be angry.It was and incident.On my opinion,i thought that it was his fault because maybe he was walking along the road without crossing the zebra-crossing or using the traffic light.The driver might not see him.I felt that this shouldn't happen anymore as   it gives a bad impression of people who lives in Singapore.
I hope to hear from you soon and do visit Singapore please because we miss you!
yours sincerely,
Sarup

Story of the file

People called me a "File boy".The reason was I always loved my file and i never leave the file unattended and i always bring my file wherever i go.My file is a unique file and the shape of my file is rectangular and it was in light-blue colour which is my favorite colour.I had been using my file since when i was primary one and now i am primary six.My mother bought me the file when i was primary one.She asked me to promise her that i would take care of my file properly.

Today i brought my file to the Art room for Art lesson.I took out my colour pencil and colouring. Unfortunately,while i was using the colour pencil i accidentally draw line on my file.I was so frustrated with myself cause the file means everything to me.I couldn't believe that i'm so careless.I broke my promise and it regretted.I didnt feel like using the file anymore.On my home feeling frustrated,i saw a big box near the lift.I looked around there were no one around so i quickly threw my file in the box and enter the lift and went home.I entered my house,i knew my mother would be asking about my file so i lied to her that my file was in my bag so she smiled at me and praised me for taking good care of my file.I was totally ashamed of myself for lying to my mother.A few weeks later,our school organised learning journey to orphanage.The teacher asked the student to take each file from the box as it was needed later for the learning journey.Suddenly,i noticed a rectangular file which was light-blue in colour.It look familiar,it was my own file!It was so clean as someone took trouble to clean it.I was glad my file was clean from the onwards i learnt a variable lesson that i shouldn't throw things which can be reuse.

English

My  name is Sarup Limbu from Chong Boon seconday school.My class is 1E1. I'm an international student from Nepal.I chose Chong Boon as a 1st choice because I'm interested in Chong Boon's volleyball team(boys).My hobbies is soccer but not volleyball.Actually I wanted a school which has soccer as a CCA but since Chong Boon does not have soccer as a CCA so I chose volleyball because volleyball is one of the sports which I like.

My favourite colour is blue.Blue represent the colour of the sky and sea.The scenery of the sky and sea looks beautiful that why i chose blue colour as my favourite colour.My favourite food is Lor Mee.This food was introduced by my friend primary school.I know it is unhealthy so i always eat once a week.I used to eat Lor Mee at my primary school.There is something interesting about myself is i have a natural talent at soccer.I started playing soccer since when i was kindergarden. I used to play soccer with my neighbours.First day at Chong Boon,i was shy.I was sitting beside Damien who is now my best friend.It all started when the teacher asked us to introduced the person sitting beside.His favourite  hobby is to draw.After getting to know each other,I became talkative.Life in primary school was awesome.My favourite teacher was Ms Suppiah.She teaches us Math.I used to fail Math but because of her my math improved tremendously.

I missed my primary school but i'm enjoying myself at my seconadry school too.I hope that life in secondary school will be awesome as how my primary school was!!!!